So there isn't many bad things at all about this pic. So what i'm going to say is I really like your shading, its well placed and I can see many great things coming from you in the future.
I gave you 1 star for Vision because you didn't really have anything else to tell a story, and thats what I look for in a pic, is the story they tell.
I gave you 2 Stars for Originality because its an animal and I think animals are original, but its a low 2 stars because once again I want to see more.
I gave you 4 Stars for Technique because of your good shading placement and you actually made it look like there's fur on it lol, believe or not but a lot of people forget that part.
I gave you 1 Star for impact because it didn't really catch my eye or put an impact on me at all.
All and all your a great artist im guessing at the beginner level...
If you keep working hard you will be great.